Prevailing: Sundered Trust *Awarded*
Exhaling all memory, your fingers topographic to my sundered flesh; if you could see how lies bruise trust, and I've born it all in search of a soul that offers honesty. The nazarene of in between,...
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Sky, thanks so much. I'm glad you like that line, but as I read what you typed, I had to laugh, because that line was part of the first lines of this poem, and it was supposed to evolve from summer...
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Nine, thank you. I'm glad you felt the deeper layers of this too. And that hat. . .that hat makes me feel "saucy." LOL! Thanks.
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Lucy, thank you so much. I'm going to visit that comment often, as it makes me feel like maybe I'm doing something "ok" here with this writing. THANKS!
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Brian, you know better what this is all about. . .thanks for listening to me. I'm in a sunny moment today, so yea! Thanks for gracing this with an award too. Every time, I'm always so humbled.
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Zeph, thank you. Yes, I certainly think we've all had bruised trust, and it takes a while to heal. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for stopping by.
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Bob, I love what you had to say about the weeds and flowers. . .and there's LOTS of weeds! LOL! Thanks for reading and leaving such a kind reply.
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Ali, me chasin. . .nevah! You know I like to do the luring. And now I'm off to read your latest. . .thanks for stopping by.
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naaah is no shame to chase, chase it if it's got a tail Come Visit DreamLand ×´He Came ¨) ¸.´out of¸. ´¨)no where ¸.*¨) (¸.Always´ (¸.´A Friend ¸.´ ¸.´¸.*`of the victim-» «.At the.*¨)...
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One can really the emotions in the write! Well done Lady!
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you do indeed have a way with words that I never tire of glad to see that you're still writing after my ime away. love you, sis. -huge hugs-
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Wonderful words woven like magic. Quote:now now sexy who's got U woooed and chasin, hooked and mushy, do tell Yes Miss scorp, do tell us all, so we know whom to envy! DS
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Quote:The nazarene of in between, where I've waited for truth to crumble, and with it my ashes of self-esteem scatter. i relate all too well to this - indeed struck a chord. this whole piece just...
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It's in our lines we can be found best.. only few eyes may read the real of us. Exceptionnal, Traci Congrats for this award._________________________________________________
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Quote:The nazarene of in between, where I've waited for truth to crumble, and with it my ashes of self-esteem scatter.Very strong in poetic verse, Traci. Ya gotta know I'm feeling this one. ~ Becky
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Ali, I've chased too many princes that turned out to be toads. So. . .no thanks. . .I'll watch others get chased though.
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Tracey, thank you for your kind words upon mine. I'm always happy to see you've dropped by and left your thoughts.
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Still writing, yes sis. . .I kinda don't know what else I'd do, except go crazy, if I didn't. It has certainly brought a smile to see you on the boards again. Thanks for leaving your thoughts on this...
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Carolyn, that does seem to be the sticking point (the quote you mentioned) and how past and future are just hung in the present, waiting for any good thing to crumble. Thanks for stopping by. . .Hope...
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So very true, Mir. . .I know so many pieces of me are placed within my own lines. . .a therapy of sorts. Thanks for letting me know you get that too.
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